Sunday, October 28, 2012

Cooking Meth in Hell's Kitchen




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In a 2002 New York Times Article entitled “Meth Building Its Hell's Kitchen in Rural America” reporter Timothy Egan describes the devastating effects of the growing meth epidemic in rural America. The reader is enlightened to the crisis through the experiences of Sheriff Rick Bart of Snohomish County in the State of Washington. The article describes the effects of this dangerous drug upon this rural area both to the individuals who use it, as well as the criminal justice system there. Mr. Egan chronicles the history of the drug's onset and educates the reader as to the reasons it has seemed to gravitate towards similar geographical areas. Sheriff Bart supplied startling statistical evidences which lent credibility to the points being made by the author. One such example is as follows, “I'd say it's getting to the point where 80 percent of all our calls are somehow related to meth.” Another statistic which enforces the idea that meth effects many persons other than the user is relayed by social worker Cammy Hart-Anderson, “Almost two-thirds of referrals to social workers in Snohomish County for domestic violence or abandoned or neglected children are related to meth...” The author also discusses the ease by which the drug is manufactured as well as the danger of the toxic ingredients involved.
This article directly relates to “Winter's Bone” as the characters in the novel were effected by the drugs use and distribution adversely just as the examples described by Sheriff Bart. One user described performing “home dentistry” while under the effects of this powerful chemical. Another drives around aimlessly while chewing her fingernails to nubs attempting to fill a shopping list of dangerous ingredients used in it's manufacture. Just as the fictitious account of child abandonment in the story, the article uses true evidences brought forth from social workers on the front lines. This article would be an excellent source for use in essay #3 as it has the credibility of both law enforcement as well as social workers who are directly impacted each and every day by this scourge.

If you would like to read the article in it's entirety: http://www.nytimes.com/2002/02/06/us/meth-building-its-hell-s-kitchen-in-rural-america.html?pagewanted=2&src=pm

works cited
 
Egan, Timothy. "Meth Building Its Hell's Kitchen in Rural America." The New York Times. The New York Times, 06 Feb. 2002. Web. 28 Oct. 2012. <http://www.nytimes.com/2002/02/06/us/meth-building-its-hell-s-kitchen-in-rural-america.html?pagewanted=2>.

Thursday, October 11, 2012

Midterm Reflections



Ms. Cline,
I feel at this point in the term I am feeling very accomplished and fulfilled having met the challenges of a very demanding course schedule. I have, for the most part, met the challenges and received complementary marks for the effort. I don’t for the life of me know why I “bury” myself by choosing such a workload and then wondering why I get burned out. I have high expectations for what I believe I can accomplish and often deny that one might possibly get behind. Things happen, such is life and yet there is grace. One thing I can say is that I am very grateful for the “no questions asked” option for one assignment. You see there was one week early on where I found myself homeless and missed a full week’s coursework in all four of my classes. None gave grace but you Ms. Cline. None gave grace.
Now on to my reflections on the readings required by this class, loved Bartleby, initially hated Modest but quite surprisingly I fell in love with it. So much so that I took time to read it through again even after the assignment was finished! Let me expound on these individually.
I was drawn to Bartleby for two reasons initially, first was my love for Melville’s most popular work: “Moby Dick” and second by my interest in the legal profession. I am studying law as well as English this year and am even considering changing my major to Law entirely. I was delighted by the idiosyncrasies of the individual characters within the story. I found myself frustrated by the main characters constant response of “I prefer not to.” Much as the narrator must have been. But my delight and even frustration were short-lived as emotions which ultimately turned to sadness at the plight of this lost soul. I believe this was a great choice as a reading for this class Ms. Cline.
Now as to “A Modest Proposal” I was surprised by this work in the end. At the first reading I fought the work at every turn. I thought, “How disgusting”. I could not have been more adverse to the reading. I never thought in a million years that I would find the value in this piece. But by setting aside my personal bias and just looking at the mechanics used by the author I found my distaste give way to a greater understanding. Thank You.
My goal for the second half of the semester is to be less dogmatic and have more of an open mind toward all literary works. I will find the value within each. I will examine the rhetorical techniques and employ them within my own writing and determine which suit my very own style. Heck, some may even find my work initially “disgusting” but redeeming in some small way. I can’t wait to see what you have in store for us Ms. Cline!

Sunday, September 30, 2012

Swift: Shock and Awe!



Response to Swift Essay
            The corner on Anglesea Street is littered with papers, books and pamphlets as the gentlewoman clutches at the stacks on her way to the cobblestones. Passers-by dive to catch her and prevent her from injury or at the very least from soiling her fine clothing with Dublin’s filth. They are un-aware of the cause of her fainting, yet it is still clutched within her silk-gloved hand.  A literary work so heinous and disgusting that it has brought about similar responses everywhere it’s read. This work, published under a pseudonym, proposes the sale of the emerald isle’s impoverished children for the purpose of cannibalism. This was to address the overpopulation of the poor Irish people and to benefit the general society as a whole. Through his 1729 satirical essay “A Modest Proposal” Jonathan Swift is quite effective in his attempt to prompt his contemporaries to re-assess their opinions on many social conditions.  Can we surmise that the mere shock of the public at large was the intended purpose of this work?
            The answer would be both yes and no. Initially any reader of the text would be drawn in by being made aware of the current plight of those less fortunate. Swift is clever in this tactic by delaying his shocking solution by a few paragraphs of seemingly harmless prose. He addresses his audience from the authority of his pseudonym of which he claims to be a doctor. Many similar writings of that period began in the same tone and addressed the exact same issues but none in the way in which Swift crafted.  By this I believe we can assume the authors of such text were among his intended audiences. He may very well have aimed at shaming them as well as their solutions as inadequate or maybe condescending toward the peoples they intended to aid, the Irish. His audience included the English themselves as well as Irish society as he lived in both and was very familiar with the predatory relationship which existed between the two cultures. What social conditions existed in that period which pleaded for such a harsh rebuke by Swift?
            England was notoriously oppressing the Irish peoples in many ways at this time.  Swift addressed them personally when he wrote, "For this kind of commodity will not bear exportation, and flesh being of too tender a consistence, to admit a long continuance in salt, although perhaps I could name a country, which would be glad to eat up our whole nation without it." Also the economic conditions within Ireland did perpetuate a cycle of poverty that he was personally witness to. One only had to walk the same streets he did to be acutely made aware of their plight. There existed the stereotype of the Irish poor as thieves which he alludes to by twice mentioning the sentiment within the text. There existed a predatory relationship between landlords of the time and their victims; the tenants. A close reading and attention to subtleties within the pamphlet give light to the religious disparities between Catholic Ireland and Protestant England just as the news of today does: some things never change. Can we therefore surmise that Swift was effective at addressing his audience(s) whatever their position within these social contexts?
            From the woman of wealth fainted on Anglesea Road, to the Landlords who preyed upon their tenants, from the English policymakers who were much to blame, from the clergy of both sides to the condescending authors of segmented “solutions”  who missed their marks; Swift by choosing such a tone in his prose met his. He got the attention of all humanity in that region, regardless of class, in a profound way which caused quite a stir, thus more conversation on the problems but I think ultimately towards solutions and remedies. Consider the fact that we are here almost three hundred years later talking about his tactics, aims and success.  Can we identify any of the common rhetorical tools in the Essay by Mr. Swift?
            Of course we can! Being well trained in these classical appeals, the author employs many of the agents of Aristotle toward his aim. By relying on the false credibility of a fictitious doctor right on the front cover of the pamphlet the author has employed the common rhetorical tool of ethos. He has taken on the “cloak” of credibility by deceiving his audience into think that he is qualified to speak on such matters. The most obvious appeal in the text is the emotional one, or in other words; pathos. We feel our emotions range from sympathy for the impoverished, to horror at the proposed solution; to anger at the arrogance of the narrator. All examples of the author’s intended use of the common rhetorical tool pathos.  Beyond rhetorical devices are there other literary methods at work here?
            Yes, satire, More precisely Juvenalian satire. Abrasive and contemptuous in nature, this method juxtaposes the decency or sense of right order against the alternative producing what I think is a more effective shock to the reader, Swift does not wish for a passive audience. He desires action as a result of his work. He proposes an absurd and outright morbid solution to the problems to propel the reader to ask him/herself what might be a viable one and then hopefully act in some productive way.
            From Anglesea Road 1729 to Downing Street London, from Broadway in the USA and even in this day and age: the use of satire to engage one’s audience can be a very effective literary method. Jonathan Swift did everything right, and in such a profound way that we are discussing and learning from his writings today three hundred years later. He affected his audience by causing their collective jaws to drop aghast………just ask the woman down on Anglesea Road…….that is, when she regains consciousness.
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Response to Swift Essay
            The corner on Anglesea Street is littered with papers, books and pamphlets as the gentlewoman clutches at the stacks on her way to the cobblestones. Passers-by dive to catch her and prevent her from injury or at the very least from soiling her fine clothing with Dublin’s filth. They are un-aware of the cause of her fainting, yet it is still clutched within her silk-gloved hand.  A literary work so heinous and disgusting that it has brought about similar responses everywhere it’s read. This work, published under a pseudonym, proposes the sale of the emerald isle’s impoverished children for the purpose of cannibalism. This was to address the overpopulation of the poor Irish people and to benefit the general society as a whole. Through his 1729 satirical essay “A Modest Proposal” Jonathan Swift is quite effective in his attempt to prompt his contemporaries to re-assess their opinions on many social conditions.  Can we surmise that the mere shock of the public at large was the intended purpose of this work?
            The answer would be both yes and no. Initially any reader of the text would be drawn in by being made aware of the current plight of those less fortunate. Swift is clever in this tactic by delaying his shocking solution by a few paragraphs of seemingly harmless prose. He addresses his audience from the authority of his pseudonym of which he claims to be a doctor. Many similar writings of that period began in the same tone and addressed the exact same issues but none in the way in which Swift crafted.  By this I believe we can assume the authors of such text were among his intended audiences. He may very well have aimed at shaming them as well as their solutions as inadequate or maybe condescending toward the peoples they intended to aid, the Irish. His audience included the English themselves as well as Irish society as he lived in both and was very familiar with the predatory relationship which existed between the two cultures. What social conditions existed in that period which pleaded for such a harsh rebuke by Swift?
            England was notoriously oppressing the Irish peoples in many ways at this time.  Swift addressed them personally when he wrote, "For this kind of commodity will not bear exportation, and flesh being of too tender a consistence, to admit a long continuance in salt, although perhaps I could name a country, which would be glad to eat up our whole nation without it." Also the economic conditions within Ireland did perpetuate a cycle of poverty that he was personally witness to. One only had to walk the same streets he did to be acutely made aware of their plight. There existed the stereotype of the Irish poor as thieves which he alludes to by twice mentioning the sentiment within the text. There existed a predatory relationship between landlords of the time and their victims; the tenants. A close reading and attention to subtleties within the pamphlet give light to the religious disparities between Catholic Ireland and Protestant England just as the news of today does: some things never change. Can we therefore surmise that Swift was effective at addressing his audience(s) whatever their position within these social contexts?
            From the woman of wealth fainted on Anglesea Road, to the Landlords who preyed upon their tenants, from the English policymakers who were much to blame, from the clergy of both sides to the condescending authors of segmented “solutions”  who missed their marks; Swift by choosing such a tone in his prose met his. He got the attention of all humanity in that region, regardless of class, in a profound way which caused quite a stir, thus more conversation on the problems but I think ultimately towards solutions and remedies. Consider the fact that we are here almost three hundred years later talking about his tactics, aims and success.  Can we identify any of the common rhetorical tools in the Essay by Mr. Swift?
            Of course we can! Being well trained in these classical appeals, the author employs many of the agents of Aristotle toward his aim. By relying on the false credibility of a fictitious doctor right on the front cover of the pamphlet the author has employed the common rhetorical tool of ethos. He has taken on the “cloak” of credibility by deceiving his audience into think that he is qualified to speak on such matters. The most obvious appeal in the text is the emotional one, or in other words; pathos. We feel our emotions range from sympathy for the impoverished, to horror at the proposed solution; to anger at the arrogance of the narrator. All examples of the author’s intended use of the common rhetorical tool pathos.  Beyond rhetorical devices are there other literary methods at work here?
            Yes, satire, More precisely Juvenalian satire. Abrasive and contemptuous in nature, this method juxtaposes the decency or sense of right order against the alternative producing what I think is a more effective shock to the reader, Swift does not wish for a passive audience. He desires action as a result of his work. He proposes an absurd and outright morbid solution to the problems to propel the reader to ask him/herself what might be a viable one and then hopefully act in some productive way.
            From Anglesea Road 1729 to Downing Street London, from Broadway in the USA and even in this day and age: the use of satire to engage one’s audience can be a very effective literary method. Jonathan Swift did everything right, and in such a profound way that we are discussing and learning from his writings today three hundred years later. He affected his audience by causing their collective jaws to drop aghast………just ask the woman down on Anglesea Road…….that is, when she regains consciousness.

Sunday, September 23, 2012

Rhetorical Anaylysis Of "The End Of America 2" Advertisement



Having viewed the advertisement for a film entitled “The End of America 2” (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MvLDTwvPR3w)I feel as though the author was effective at using all of the elements of rhetorical argument. First and I think the most obvious was in the use of the rhetorical tool of ethos. We are hearing the well-known and distinctive voice of Mr. Alex Jones an authority on issues directly relating to the content of the film. I trust Alex Jones and rely on past experiences with products and content he has recommended. Also along those same lines the ad mentions past predictions of the filmmaker which came to pass. Definite ethos argument as the track record of the filmmaker should provide comfort to the viewer that the content he/she might be considering viewing comes from an authoritative and credible source.
                The creator of the ad also employed the rhetorical tool of pathos by appealing emotionally to the audience. We all generally care for the well-being of our finances, our families and society as a whole. By the mention of threats to these institutions we are compelled to listen further or ultimately click on the link to the website for the film to apprise ourselves to information having to do with the threats. This along with Mr. Jones’s serious tone exemplifies effective use of Pathos in the Ad.
                The use of Logos in the ad might be best addressed by; again, the listing of the past track record of the film-maker as well as the mention of a reputable Magazine such as Baron’s recommending the film. The audience is propelled to follow a path of reasoning. If the film-maker has made successful predictions in the past it is therefore reasonable to assume that this current film might contain similar predictions that might aid us the audience in preparing for events which might affect our lives in a significant way.
                By the effective use of all three of the common rhetorical tools the author of this ad has succeeded in his/her goal of compelling a further look at the content, has effectively considered audience and through this analysis inadvertently taught me about these fundamental constructs of rhetoric.

               

Sunday, September 9, 2012

Bartleby, the Scrivener



                 Years ago I had a close friend who suffered from clinical depression after losing a job and a longtime girlfriend all in the same week. He answered those challenges by shutting himself into his apartment, drawing the drapes closed and answering neither the door nor the telephone. The situation went on for a whole week where he did not eat and remained secluded until those close to him began to worry about his welfare. He finally relented to open his door to his father only after it was a surety he would breach the bedroom window with the screwdriver he held. Thankfully he was able to receive the help he needed to mend his sense of loss and hopelessness toward his future. Many who suffer from mental illness are not as fortunate as my close friend leading to dire and sometimes fatal consequences. The main character in Herman Melville’s “Bartleby, the Scrivener”, although fictitious, is just one of those lonely souls who repel assistance and suffer a deteriorating existence as a result.
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              In the famous short story Bartleby is observed by those around him to be “…a little luny…”, and invoke emotions toward his condition which range from anger in one, to pity from the narrator. However he is perceived along the way he is steadfast in his desire to withdraw from all endeavors be they social or work related. This insolence toward aid shows a very common coping mechanism employed by those filled with melancholy.  Just as my friend had withdrawn from the world to his home Bartleby withdraws in the best way in which a homeless person can, socially. He seems not unlike a drone going through the paces but resolved to a fatalistic outlook toward his future.
The website WebMD list signs of depression which include appetite loss and loss of interest in activities once found pleasurable just as described by the author in the story.  In the end we are sadly enlightened to the fact that we are sometimes powerless to assist those who themselves don’t see the possibility that their situation can be improved upon.  If only poor Bartleby had a father equipped with compassion, tenacity and a screwdriver so to speak, maybe his death could have been prevented. I urge all who may read this to educate themselves as to the warning signs of depression and ask yourself if you might be witness to a silent cry for help. For more information on what to look for follow the following link : http://www.webmd.com/depression/guide/detecting-depression